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Post by Tao~ on May 31, 2007 12:45:24 GMT -5
He looked at her with eyes so wild...
Don't be afraid...
Come to me..my child....
His lips met hers in full embrace...
This truly is heaven...
She saw his face....
With strong arms...he held her tight...
Arms that were great and full of might....
As he broke away from her she noticed his gaze...
Full of pain...what was this maze?
She knows that this is just for now....
He will return to her again someday...
Somehow.....
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Post by Snoogans4Jay on May 31, 2007 13:07:47 GMT -5
GREAT work......you are really good at this  |
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Post by elisabeth on May 31, 2007 18:19:03 GMT -5
aww, that's really sweet.
I tried that poetry thing, because like you I wanted to do a poem about Johnny and what I found out was that it's difficult to write in such short lines that rhyme so I give kudos to anyone who manages to do that! ; D
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Post by Tao~ on May 31, 2007 19:22:06 GMT -5
Awwww...you two!! I think I'm goona cry!!!.....  No really thanks for the compliments....really..I just write when the mood strikes me.........  It needs to more often!!!! |
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Post by Tao~ on Jun 8, 2007 19:02:26 GMT -5
He came to me the other day....
Just a look...no words to say...
But I just had to turn away...
How can I love a man too real??
How do I react..think or feel???
A simple touch was all it took..
My breath left me with that one precious look...
But I am so human and he is not...
He is never forgotten...in my mind....
His words spoken ...kind loving...and true...
With him around..I'll never feel blue...
But he is just a memory...it's true...
Or is he?
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Post by Tao~ on Jul 18, 2007 19:51:24 GMT -5
I cannot cry...
My tears become my blood-red with hatred..
Moist with sorrow....
Can't tell if I'll still be alive tommorrow....
He took my love..
He took my life...
Tried to make me a model wife....
But in the process...he took my soul....my life...my all....
Now he cares for the flower that I was...
Every day...a petal falls down...
How many are left?....
How can he break the chains...without stepping on his own blood?
All to escape this hatred flood....
He would love to see me dead....
He turns the knife every day..
Opening the wound a tad more...
Shredding me of my feedlings...
Slowly and steadily.....
Watching me...
Watching me die.....
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Post by elisabeth on Jul 19, 2007 7:31:39 GMT -5
how come I missed the previous one? Love them both though, got to envy your ability to write with so vivid expressions, although they're powerful and I enjoy reading you're poetry I sincerely hope you're not writing from your own experience. ; ) Like always looking forward for more!
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Post by Snoogans4Jay on Jul 19, 2007 7:33:28 GMT -5
You ARE talented Tao, but if you would put the talent into writing a poem (s) about JOHNNY I would be your best friend  |
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Post by Tao~ on Jul 19, 2007 12:56:52 GMT -5
She was in the front row.....
How could he ever know?
That her nights were filled with his face...
How could he know in such a large place?
She watches him as he sings his songs...
This has got to be right...
No room for wrong.....
As he sings the last word...late into the night...
He kisses her cheek.....
Her eyes fill with light....
Who would have thought he would ever know....
That girl.....all alone...
In the front row~
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Post by Tao~ on Jul 19, 2007 18:07:16 GMT -5
how come I missed the previous one? Love them both though, got to envy your ability to write with so vivid expressions, although they're powerful and I enjoy reading you're poetry I sincerely hope you're not writing from your own experience. ; ) Like always looking forward for more! Thank you so much.....I write from my heart....I am glad you enjoyed it...... |
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Post by Snoogans4Jay on Jul 19, 2007 20:46:06 GMT -5
She was in the front row..... How could he ever know? That her nights were filled with his face... How could he know in such a large place? She watches him as he sings his songs... This has got to be right... No room for wrong..... As he sings the last word...late into the night... He kisses her cheek..... Her eyes fill with light.... Who would have thought he would ever know.... That girl.....all alone... In the front row~ I LOVE LOVE LOVE this one.......  |
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Post by Tao~ on Jul 20, 2007 12:56:44 GMT -5
Calm was the evening...
Clear was the sky....
She held his hand...
He did not ask why....
The boy in plaid was saying goodbye
But it's not for long...
So please don't cry...
Going to America you see...
A singer great and mighty he will be....
A master of his special art....
But that's how it is...
Right from the start......
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Post by Snoogans4Jay on Aug 2, 2007 8:36:29 GMT -5
Calm was the evening... Clear was the sky.... She held his hand... He did not ask why.... The boy in plaid was saying goodbye But it's not for long... So please don't cry... Going to America you see... A singer great and mighty he will be.... A master of his special art.... But that's how it is... Right from the start...... mmmmmmmmm I really LIKED how this one starts out  |
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